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What Part of me

what part of me would you keep?

if you could change anythign about me?

I'm not paper doll

so why do people always make me out to be one

To all of you i'm nothing

i'll never be good enough

What part of me would you lose

if you could change my whole outlook

would you?

i'm not like the rest

i'm not a paper doll

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Thank you for your well expressed entry, good luck in my contest, Josie