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Goodbye Fright

When nightmares frighten, fill mind with concern
One look at you,, fright changes to delight

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  • Desire gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    Welcome Back!!

    Beautiful Your piece qualifies and elated to see You backBest wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Desire gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Goodbye Fright
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept feeling nudged to mention: Amityville~ just the one word seeing phrase: You are Sweet~ in reference to gestures Now strange as it may sound~ while reading I was getting a reference to: Watch Out
    and word: Neighbor- whether physical neighbor or someone close to You
    Hearing phrase: spilt milk- metaphor
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    ...fright changes to delight
    Beautiful Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~