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On My Mind

You...
drag me down
pull me under
suffocate all other thoughts
until there's nothing left.

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  • Desire gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: On My Mind
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept feeling this word: futon for some reason~ but also word: Metaphor and word: period...but it feels like the end...period meaning the end
    Wild as it may sound- I was getting words: Miniature Golf- and nudged to mention reference to: complete the task at hand
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    suffocate all other thoughts
    Beautiful Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~