Freely I give you the ability to be the person you are meant to be
Author notes
Please let the picture stir Your rue...
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15 Words
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words X - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 8, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be courteous and comment..NO rude or critical critiques please.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Ability
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept feeling this need to say: Between the skin and bones lies Your worth but in addition nudged to say~ but no mere Man comprehends true value and unable to ever appreciate It is like this feeling~ and from what I am getting: You have felt His Touch- now hearing what sounds like: One Mourning- and not Morning but Mourning I am being shown eyes of a Sparrow~ Nudged t mention that~
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Freely I give you...
Beautiful Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wonderful
Very provoking. a great take on the picture.
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This is simply amazing. This one lines says so much. Oh if we take the time appreciate and let him guide us to the person within....there is so much joy and peace. And many moments of I didn't think I had that in me but look what I did. This has touched me so deeply as lately I have been struggling with some inner demons so to speak. Thanks for always lighting my way with the words that come simply from you.
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You have said it in simple words freely i give this is the truth of the light.....
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Perfection
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