I’m but one shining
star among a million
lights that He holds
in His hands.
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words X - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 8, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So we feel special then?
I like this one. I cannot make anything mean quite so much in so little words. -
Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Shining Star
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept feeling this HUGE smile
Much Light upon my skin~
hearing word: Yes and seeing what looks like an ivory bunny~ symbolic
Seeing what looks like words: Gracious as they come- reference to You...and nudged to mention~ not to question what You already know to be true
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...star among a million
Beautiful Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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That's wonderfully expressed.
God does protect everyone equally. -
Shining
Awesome! I like where you went with this one. Thanks for telling me about this site - I'm already enjoying it.
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Wow... Richard Gere is jesus! (Sorry... the picture kinda looks like him to me.)
This was very interesting. I liked the message that came with the poem. Hmmm... I like how you capitalized the words referring to "him."
Great write!
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I like that. Well done.
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Very eloquent in so few words. Best of luck in the contest.
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