He is my keeper,
my salvation,
my hope.
He holds my soul in his hands.
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words X - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 8, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is beautiful
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Yes... Lovely.
congrats on the new shiney 
Delila
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: He
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I kept hearing word: Kindergarten and a reference to child- Now strange as it may sound- phrase: You hold back...I was seeing like a neon sign
also seeing words: I am there for You~
then a question posed: why do You doubt-.....and being shown a reference to Easter
Hearing phrase: Miracle of Birth
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
He is my keeper
Beautiful Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Beautifully put. Goes with the picture so very well. All the best in the contest
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Wonderful view on the prompt, and you used the 15 words quite well I'm sure you'll do well with it.
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Amazing take on the picture with words so true. Best of luck in the contest.
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