Loving you was right for me
no matter what others said.
Being without you in my arms
makes me feel as if I'm dead.
You filled all my needs so well
I hope I filled yours too
I do not try to fill anyone's now
I have no heart for it would not be true.
The smallest thing would mean so much
'cause it was given from your heart.
Big things now make no difference
I fell so torn apart.
You have gone along without me
but remember what I said is true
You'll never find another one
To love you as I do.
A contest entry
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575 points, ended June 5, 2008, 6 entries
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Ah, and isn't it our own opinion of what is right that matters most, after all? Thank you for entering and good luck.
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It is said that life is a series of hello's and goodbye's. We're elated on the hello's but sad on the goodbye's. When we open our heart to love we open ourself to joy but also to the possibility of sorrow.
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