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holding on

I have 10 days
to hold on
not to go cutting
not to spill blood

I have 10 days
I have to stop!
cause the 14th
is my mums birthday

but I can't hold on
every minute seems like a waste of time
every second feels like being dead
but I have to hold on

I feel something deep inside
hunger, it's called
and I can't survive
I need to give in

but then my conscious is screaming
YOU CAN'T DO THIS
THINK ABOUT THE DISSAPOINTMENT!
and then I try to stop

I try to stop the razor
which is trying to get closer
with every breath I take
and it's getting more difficult every day

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  • Allycat897
    June 7, 2008

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    I love this poem i feel like this too and it is hard to stop trust me ive tryed....im still doin it!!!!


  • Sound of Madness
    June 6, 2008

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    Man, I know how that is. It took me months to stop, and everyday, I had that nagging urge to cut. Fight, I believe you can do it as well, just have faith in yourself.


  • Suicidal Angel92
    June 4, 2008

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    Okay. . . .

    Keep teying. . .
    I know that you will make it. . .
    I believe in you. . .
    I know you you can do it. . .
    Just stay strong. . .