ohhhh
I would trade, every star in the sky
Just to see, that twinkle in your eye
I would walk, around Earth's every mile
Just to see, that love in your smile
I would give, up everything for you
Just to make, you happy when you're blue
yeah, ohhh yeahhh
There's something about you girl
That I can't explain
There's something about you girl
That I can't restrain
And everytime I talk to you girl
I feel whole and complete
Then sometimes I talk to you girl
Like I'm on a one way street
ohhh
I would go, pretty much any place
Just to see, that glow on your face
I would hold, my breath for a week
Just to see, that dimple on your cheek
I would stay, close to you never apart
Just to feel, the warmth from your heart
yeah, ohhh yeahhh
There's something about you girl
That I can't explain
There's something about you girl
That I can't restrain
And everytime I talk to you girl
I feel whole and complete
Then sometimes I talk to you girl
Like I'm on a one way street
Like I'm on a one way street
Author notes
<<< Don't You, Forget About Me - Contest >>>
Option 3.
A contest entry
- Power of Song by KingSorrows.
400 points, ended July 3, 2008, 25 entries
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550 points, ended August 4, 2008, 31 entries
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filled with cliches!!! just how I like 'em. thank you for the entry.
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Thanks, this was for sure a fluffy write. I'm glad you enjoyed it
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BEAUTIFUL
Yet another gorgeous entry of which leaves me breathless and definitly feeling the love. =] I love it and i began singing it as i read. I hope you don't mind. hehe.
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Sing away ... It's good to hear that you enjoyed this!
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awww this is one of the cutest poems EVER!!! I love it and wish I could be that girl.. because who ever this was ment to be about is really lucky..
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what can I say?? I like being cute sometimes
Glad you liked this doll
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Wow...This is sweet!! I love it!!! <3 Thanx for entering
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Thank you!
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I like this song! I won't lie and say it's not filled with unneeded cliches and fluff, but overall it's alright
Thank you for your entry,
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Fluff is what I was going for Thanks for liking it
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This is actually some cool lyrics. LOL I did get a little chuckle out of it. Love does that to ya. LOL Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed
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