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Blue Heart

Most hearts are red
But mine is blue
Probably cause, it misses you.
That halo on your head
Must have been plastic
And those white wings on your back
Looked kinda elastic
And for the heart you must lack
I guess you thought you'd steal mine.
And leave my chest with a vacancy sign.
You left the next day
Without delay
Leaving my heart blue
And thinking of you.

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  • LauraConfused
    June 22, 2008
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    Awesome

    I told you it was good from the start!!!


  • LoraZoroNickTrance
    June 4, 2008
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    :O

    wow that totally sounds like one of those awesome love songs I'd listen to...that's just awesome


  • YourAngelUndercover
    June 4, 2008
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    good

    guess you've been left by someone recently for you to write this poem!
    Rly good tho ..


  • Klayer
    June 4, 2008

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    I love the lines" And for the heart you must lack
    I guess you thought you'd steal mine.
    And leave my chest with a vacancy sign.
    "

    VERY good poem!