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Loving Rain

Fires burn, making embers flow away
Setting thoughts free through the rain
Winds blow softly, mad, like angels cry
Smiles are long, but they still stretch
So with the dancing rain, love cries desire
The fires of love flare the light of the world

The rain pours, but the fire still remains
Engulfing the hearts alive with passion
Tears of love flood the truth so elegantly
Emotions reflect the rain as it glides the air
A life can go so far with love, but truth is forever
Ask for loving rain, and await for the blessings love brings

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 15

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    I love the format of this.
    Your words are honest, the emotion clear it's so easy to see you mean every emotion we are able to experience through your words

    Shari


  • burning-rose
    June 9, 2008
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    Baby,I am grateful that I get to live these words!I love you forever and always!


  • Decorus Somnium
    June 5, 2008

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    Such an emotional poem. It's so romantic and beautiful. Very well done. I like your writing style.
    Keep writing

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