Have you ever wondered why you are you?
Why God made me the person I am,
Why am I not the star you see on TV,
Why don't I look like that.
Do they feel like i feel,
why I can't have the Escalade on 20's.
Why did God put me in the situations
I have now,
why put me in the situations
I had before.
Why am I me.
What purpose do I serve to be me?
What is my life going to be,
where will I end up?
I wonder sometimes why I'm me and you are you,
I guess it was for a purpose.
I'm me because I'm me
You're you because you're you.
As I feel the breeze blowing,
feeling God's creation,
I came to the conclusion,
God made me and if
that is the case
I'm beautiful
that's me.
Author notes
Ms Sexy
In a list
A contest entry
- Spiritual Battle by Gods Lil Warrior.
330 points, ended September 24, 2008, 34 entries
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Comments
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This is a great poem.
Keep up the great writing.
Thanks for entering my contest.
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I do believe that every single human has beauty within them. I really enjoyed the repetition of questions in this. The ending was great!
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I enjoyed the uncertainty in the conclusion drawn. Not an uncertainty in faith but a realisation that if what is said is to be believed then you must have faith that you are in good hands. You raise some very valid questions in the poem and despite being unable to answer most of them, there is some sense of resolution. Good luck in the contest
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well thank you so much for giving this site to read. Yes I'm me because God made me to be me. I accept my purpose here on earth.
lovely write and it has a huge point in it.
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Great job and we all wonder this sometimes thank you for entering the contest.
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I loved it. Ive seen this one before but it is a thought provoking poem just because of the questions "why?"
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Do they feel like i feel,
that was a good ansrew and a question....this poem shows emotion and some rythme... keep up the great work..
YOUR JUDGE
What is my life going to be,
where will I end up?
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Thank you
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nice.....
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Nicely penned piece my friend..quite strong theory is here.....well done....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece....
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congrads hon i told you this was a helva write it deserved gold
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The last sentence blew me away!
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Without anything in the Author's Notes, this poem was unable to qualify you to win. Im sorry, but its part of the rules. This poem was beautiful though.
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I ask myself these questions very often. This poem would be relatable to anybody.
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there are a lot of questions asked here, and im sure lots of people ask these throughout there lives. great write and good luck!
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and you are most certainly right i love love this damn i hate i cant do you a b g mrs private hell! reflections of you would make this so perfect i may do it and when ever you ready i will have it
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