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(Sort of) Love Poem

She's beautiful to him
Which she refuses to believe
Scared he'll hurt her
Of the pain she could recieve
The things he says
Take her breath away
And just hearing his voice
Makes her whole day
She knows he'll make her happy
But the last guy ruined it for the rest
She feels she's not good enough
He deserves the best
She thinks of him all the time
Although he doesnt know
Scared to get too close
Scared to let her feelings show
To him they're perfect
For eachother
But she wants it
To last forever

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 9, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is definitely a poem so many people can relate to. The feeling in your words are shared by many, in the same situation. I know I have been. You said this well. But take the chance and let the other one know, you will never know the outcome if you don't take that leap.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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