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Should I stay or go?

Everything you've ever said to me,
Every look you've given to me,
cuts me to the bone,
as I try to fade you from my memory.
It hurts so much that you act like I dont exist,
and then turn around and say you love me.
Which is it do you want me or don't you?!
You say you want me to stay,
and I want to,
but actions speak louder then words,
and to this day you have yet to prove me anything.
So the only thing I ask is let me go or make me stay.

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  • metal4ever
    May 28
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    great poem, especially the last line, keep it up


  • UnravledLove
    June 14, 2008
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    This is amazing I had this exact same thing happen sadly. This is a great poem it gave me the goosebumps
    I really like these lines:

    as I try to fade you from my memory.
    and to this day you have yet to prove me anything.
    So the only thing I ask is let me go or make me stay.

    I really hohpe this isn't happening but this is a beautiful Poem.