Away from reality,
as yet drawn from it,
convulted,contorted,mixed and combinational,
it also took on permutations,
till the time it lasted,
it had me glued and pasted,
I still recall it,
in patches though,
it reflects my inner urges,
and finalities,
as many would deny them,
but I insist,
them as finals,
they can churn stomachs,
but thats the way they are,
I see day time heroes as rogues,
and heroines as swines,
saints as devils,
and vice versa,
is this reality,
or the one I wake into,
I insist 'the reality' is my dream,
let others disagree,
let them also dream!
Author notes
let others disagree,
let them also dream!
A contest entry
- Absolute Nonsense! by marciakay81.
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Great write. Thanks for entering my contest!
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worded funny in agood way
good write. reading more
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Hmmmm....I rather liked the way you worded this. It makes me think about how I ponder and muse about my own reality. Nicely done!
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Very nice. Thank you for the entry.
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