Attempt to erase thee
Hide any contempt for me
Sorrow your heart shall feel
Lingering pain, madness redeemed
Forever be yours, this day
Lust runneth my veins
Tasting sweet nectar before thee
Droplets encourage pain
This pain you've given unto me
Kiss each spoiled memory
Yours will never be clean
For mine now runneth red, Bleed.
Like me, freely
Author notes
CREDIT PICTURE --Dripping by Hollilicious, collected from deviantart.com
A contest entry
- Dark ...Pic inspired by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
650 points, ended June 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very good my cheri!
like your poem, dark and lonely sometimes a heart feels, pain is a companion even if is a bad one, yet here we are, no strings, only allowing words to flow thru us, wink -
This is great it is so much of what i wanted to see from the pic..but your own take too
....loved bleed. like me, freely 
Excellent dark writing, thank you
and good luck
Cindy
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