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un-found glory

As time surrounds me within broken pieces,
I find myself gazing upon waivery moments....
searching for life beyond this place
I have become, cloaked as I am hidden and faded.......

Traveling inside of my mind,
I go to places far away.....
in corners that survive and strive,
relieving me, if just for a short time.

Light peaks through in shallow breaths
as I gasp for another hit......
collecting myself in bits and pieces,
I scour the scarpbook of life......
only to find blank pages, within torn and tattered words.

Looking abroad into vast imagination
I find pictures of green grass and star lit nights;
sweeping me away in soft stolen breezes,
resounding upon me like...hope and freedom,
lighting my way to bliss and new found glory.

With a sigh I am resurrected,
only to be brought back,into life.
Confined to this freedom........
I find myself hovering and stalking,
this place of happiness I long to have

like a prisoner of fate.

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  • Kindredblood
    June 24

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    sometimes i wish i could just free myself from reality, but alas no matter how much i wish for freedom, my past will always be the anchor to reality for me, excellent write, full of profound and stong emotions, very vivid, creating a mass of images, both stark and with very real feeling, beautifully written my friend.


    • mysticallytamed
      June 25
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      thnx

      thankyou for the comment,sometimes what we think of as karma is merley are in -ability to let go....I am sorry you long for freedom that you feel u can not experience, I wish for you the best and hope to fill u inside!I am glad u liked this write and appreciate ur comments!!!

  • whitewinged1
    June 8

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    Very well done

    I , like yourself Misty, long for the time when my spirit will be free to roam this place of peace ,beauty,safety, tranquility and above all love and happiness.To have to shelter ourselves and blend with the shadows of this time and space is far from what i would call peace of mind and freedom . ( of will) Keep your heart, mind, and soul open and your chin up for what you have described within your write will before too long be... your reality where your soul will only know peace, love, and true happiness But until then we must be strong and patiently wait out life's clock ,,,lol -smile- it's good for you!
    Nicely done my friend!!!

    • mysticallytamed
      June 8
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      thanks

      thankyou for the wonderful comment to this write.....
      I do appreciate the time u take to read my writes!

  • whitewinged1
    June 6
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    Hi Misty i am running very late for work but i will give u my thoughts on this awesome write when i get in from work. Have a great day ...ttyl

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