she dances with
music notes floating as air
with words sounding as breath
he writes with mystery and darkness
to release his passions
all the impact of lifes emotions
Please tell me what you think
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another name from the past that pops up today, it is nice to see you here again.
i hope all is well
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very nice!
thank you for sharing this!
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Lovely. Enjoyed this. Are they people you know?
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yes they are people i know
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Very Good
Mush said in very few words
Love the contrast in this
Rick
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opposites yet the same...well writtien in a wonderful feeling of freedom and comfort...
beautiful!
mystic,
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so much feeling!
this is great, its got loads of emotion and thought into it, such strong words
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Creative!
Love the flow of this one too! Expresses all the work and passion for the perfect dance of life. Gives much to think about in these well chosen words. Don
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awww raggy..this is a lovely poem..xxx
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I thought that this was very very beautiful. The imagery in this, for such a short piece, is wonderful. Well done Raggy.
With
Darkest
Love
Wayne Leon
xx
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quite a cocktail raggy. sensual and earthy.xxxx
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aww mom this is really really nice,
i love this, keep writing,
i miss you, all my love kitty,
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Havent read anything of yours for awhile. Im glad to have read this one. I just loved the flow of it. You can almost sense the electricity between the dancer and musician. Great job.
Soulful Woman
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Way to go sis I love it
Nice toread apoem by you.
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