i miss you.
i miss the subtle glances
i miss the intensity when our eyes connect
i miss how you know exactly what im thinking
i miss the words that make me smile so much
i miss the smile that lights up your face
i miss the kindness mixed with sarcasm
i miss the uncertainty toward what others think
i miss the insecure need for reassurance
i miss the sense of your body so close to mine
i miss the sparkle that allows me to be lost in your eyes
i miss the subtle hint of hope throughout the negitivity
i miss the quiteness when your sad
i miss knowing that you'll hang out with me no matter what.
i miss knowing that you care
i miss knowing that you'll laugh when we both know i'm not even close to funny
i miss the warmth in your voice
i miss your so-bitter-they're-sweet remarks
i miss your perfect features
i miss your inhumanly pretty face
i miss your numourous quirks that make me weak at the knees
i miss not having you wait for me
i miss the way your hair blows in the wind
i miss your addictive scent
i miss every aspect of you.
i miss you; more then you'll ever know.
i miss you more then words can convey
i miss you, and it's only been one day
Author notes
wow.
weekends, they rock...dont they?
yeah no school, no work, no fake two-faced bitches...sound like fun...right?
yeah tons of fun,
they're awsume
especially when you can only think about one FRAKEN thing...
me? bitter??
nnooooo
ok so i chose number two.
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I hope Monday comes for you soon, you don't seem like you'll last the week-end.....lol I miss you too on this note. Thanks for entering and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles
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Very well done. Seemed more like something one might put in a journal entry but that's where our deepest emotions are, right? And I said I wanted emotion. It's easy to relate to everything you said. It only kinda goes with the option though. But I see how you might be taking it. Like you miss him and you're still reaching out incase he wants you back. Very good write. To me, what the song is really talking about and what the quote I put on there says, to me, are two different things. The quote I put represents heartbreak to me and makes me think of this guy and how I was reaching out to him and even though we're not as close I still try (for some god-knows-why reason). (And sorry this comment is so long, geesh!) Thanks for entering!
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This is so sweet! I feel this way about a person I know too! this is beautiful. Good Luck.
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wow... reminds me of my ex..... its been so long, but i miss him so much..... T.T
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cool
oooh i forgot to say how much i love this poem
well i do i love it like all of them but it REMINDS ME OF SOMEONE!!!!!!]
i dunno who
cough cough lol
i love you xox -
haha u bitter nooooooooo lol
sigh i wish u would just admit u luv him already even if it wouldnt work SO WHAT u can dream atleast he is real right lol? is he he is it must be him it is him i know it is i know who it is (well i hope) u know u should just tell me who u feel so strongly about i mean doesnt it kill you to keep it all locked up there in you heart maybe thats why your ageing so fast lol
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haha yes. i am ageing *sips tea*
haha honey dont get so worked up...this is JUST A POEM
-its not what you think
lolz
chill pill
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Wow. I can relate so much... That's powerful.
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