Chalked squares,
numbers predestined,
I hop to avoid
box of disappointment,
only to find it
in every other chested pavement,
this life offers sweet delight
crowned with its own hurdles.
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Prompt-hopscotch
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bravo!
beautiful take!
love: "I hop to avoid box of disappointment,"....don't well all try to do that
elegantly penned!
thanks for entering!
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Brilliant take on this hun... I seem to jump onto that pavement often!! Love that the ending shows hope of sweet delight!
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Thanks dear..hope we find the right pavement always!
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