I am the horrific demon in your body.
Inside, I claw at your flesh and bones.
Your organs inside give me my energy.
The blood from your body helps me grow.
I am the sickening demon in your mind.
Inside, I make you do dreadful things.
Your brain gives me it’s mental strength.
Your reality becomes your nightmare.
I am the gruesome demon in your soul.
Inside, I destroy what you love most.
Your conscience will be destroyed.
You will never be free of your prison.
A contest entry
- Darkness.....whatever...as dark as you can make it PW allowed by XXxXBassMeisterxXxX.
366 points, ended July 2, 2008, 15 entries
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wow a great piece of writing that i enjoyed so much.
it left me quite blank afterwards.
but yeah great work and you are well talented.
hope you keep the great work up and hope to read more
=]
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Awesome, I have a demon in me lol I already knew this... << Excellent work! I must say... I enjoyed it... I really hope you aren't really the demon in me.. that would be... weird...
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Thanks everyone for the comments so far!
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Wow..I'm at a loss for words..
You did such a wodnerful job..The intense imagery here kind of scares me.. lol.. You really created something that is unique and interesting as well.
I really enjoyed reading this..you did a wonderful job.. Thanks for sharing.
Best of luck..
Angel
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Wow... the imagery that you painted with this piece was strong... and a little scary. I think I just peed a little.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us. It was certainly a well done write. You seem to have a lot of talent... perhaps you should submit something into my contest? Ah, anyway.... uhm, welcome to All Poetry!
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great job. i liked how you described how our demons take over our lives and suffocate us. Great job and best of luck in the contest
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