Confines of soul
unlocked;
like closed galleries
flooded with crisp light,
hues dancing with joy
to tunes off strings,
a do-re-mi of heart
in its wildest delight,
resin plumes do salsa
on tender green leaves,
all elements
jubilate with me.
Author notes
Artist: Mistress of the Vineyard by CherishedMemories
http://cherishedmemories.deviantart.com/art/Mistress-of-the-Vineyard-78900159
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A contest entry
- 'Light' Pic Prompt (PIF)..... by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended June 5, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow!! Wonderfully executed!! Another great poem from your pen! Lovely images, nice choice of words! Way to go...
BTW, I am not sure of the word 'jubilize'. I would want to consider that as "jubilate". Please let me know if I should.
All in all, your poem is superb. Nice job!!
Keep shining always.....
All the best!!
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Thank you for your kind words dear....
I checked around a bit and jubilate does seem more proper..thank you for pointing that out
Have a great day!
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You are welcome, dear poet! May God bless!
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Sigh.. I loved that opening ... how her confined soul is released... and then all the beautiful imagery you brought in to bring this picture to life.. lovely!!
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Thanks dear!So glad you enjoyed this piece!
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Aww this was so sweet and colourful, exploding with vivid imagery and detailed emotion! Loved your take on the prompt, you really brought the picture to life!!
Best of luck in the contest! -
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Thank you for your lovely comment!
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