I get lost in your eyes
Wish you and me in paradise
Those lips so sweet and tender
That can’t be found wherever
Now, I know and understand
Why they want to squeeze your hand
So let me hear you whisper
And feel you further closer
Everything seems on its way
My love for you grows day by day
Just don’t leave me with a regret
Losing you will be its death
A contest entry
- Lost In Your Kiss by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended June 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow! you seem so very in love with this girl...the wanting is just so intense.
i admire guys who aren't afraid to write poems like this...just like you did with this one
you're one o those who aren't afraid to be vulnerable.
galing!
Anna Lee
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Passion is felt in this, thanks for your entry lol
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The first and second stanza are really good.
I personally wanted to see more after reading the last stanza. All in all, a good write.
Salamat Kabayan.
HENSLEY a.k.a VIRGOAN
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