My dear sister Brittni,
Don't cry for me
I have my beautiful wings now
If only you could see
I know you miss me
I know that you care
If you look
Deep in your heart
You will find me there
I know you are hurting
You don't understand
Everything's fine
I'm holding God's hand
Just take a moment
Out of the day
You'll find
I haven't left you
I'm just leading the way
You will see me again
When you are given
Your beautiful wings
Until then you must
Go on and accomplish
Great things
Love,
Me
Author notes
Brittni, I am very sorry for your loss. I hope that you don't mind I made this into a form of a letter. I don't know you, but, I feel like I do. I hope this helps you feel better. I wish you all the best.
A contest entry
- for my sister, R.I.P. by XBrittniX.
325 points, ended June 5, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
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300 points, ended June 9, 2008, 34 entries
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420 points, ended June 20, 2008, 6 entries
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Will you please comment on my poem?
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Excellent write and so touching...each words pricks the heart. Thank you for sharing
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aww this is so touching! A beautiful write, and a well deserved Gold! Congrats on this amazing piece!!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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this poem is awesome thank you so much, i lovbed it ur the only one whos poem wasnt a prewrite thank you, im trying to get through this hard time, but its not going so well.
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You are welcome. I am glad that you liked the poem. I will keep you and your family in my prayers. Hang in there. I wrote another poem on my page called Always A Friend. If you get time maybe you could take a look at it. Thanks for Sharing. Again I am very sorry about your sister.
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awesome writing
brittini so sorry for your loss my sweet friend, this is a lovely poem for your sister, may god bless you in this time of pain,life is not easy and we don't always understand ,but know that god loves you and soeday you will see your sis again till then god bless you darling
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Thank you for commenting on my poem. I was looking throught the contests and I saw Brittini's. When I read what happened to her sister. I just had to write her a poem. My heart broke in two.
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