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A Portrait of My Love

I spoke to you in the minor key
And augmented my voice
Now we can speak in arrangement
And harmony

You brushed my blue shoulder
And though the blue brushed off, your touch lingered
And out sprang yellow
We complement each other

We photographed each other
The camera turned blue to yellow to green
And it disappeared into the grass

When I painted you
Was the first time I saw your true beauty

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  • Pretty Girl
    August 13, 2008

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    Amazing

    This piece is truly beautiful. my favorite part is (When I painted you, was the first time I saw your true beauty.) This is awesome