Me
my parents are long gone
I strives for freedom alone
Mistakes I make made the devil laugh
anymore not shall i revive
Can some one notice me fades away?
I am the last of my kind, who can tell my tale?
Satan
There is no tale,
Your life is weighted on
scale, Put your soul on sale,
Like your parents did
Join me, or no happy ending, kid
God
There’s no soul for sale,
In vales of death
I felt the pain he felt,
I was there to help,
I can tell his tale
More than he can himself
Me
From the early age I survived,
Fall down, up on my feet I revived,
Through the growing stage, I strived
My heart beats in fear of the last page tho,
Will I win this war?
Satan
The war is already been won
A human survivor needs nothing but a single bite
then together we will be, alike like my clone
join me and we will rise to the throne
God
You and your follower's reign is ending soon
Hot sulfur of hell is pending for yourdoom
Then my wrath will vanish
All evil are then punish
Will that be the last page?
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Comments
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strives
it should be just 'strive' without the 's'.
"Join me, or no happy ending, kid"
Great line. -
I loved the idea of the conversation between all of the worlds, hell, earth, and heaven. Almost like a conversation between the ego and the superego and you. Very clever piece. Not sure it it has to do with the afterlife but it oculd. good luck!
Sincerely,
ModernXTimes -
hm... this is very interesting. I like the whole idea of the conversation between God and Satan. It makes me think about it. But also at the same time, I'm not sure if this is exactly about Escaping the afterlife. Although, it could just be very abstract. Thank you for entering your poem into my contest, and best of luck in havign done so!!
Alex -
Thank you for this very interesting entry in our contest, we shall wait for the final outcome.
It was a pleasure to read...Sue and Jeff
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