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Hope

When you look to the sky,
You wounder why life is so cold.
Why you cant be bold,

Why fate is so crual,
And you are such a fool
A useless tool,

When I walked away,
You didnt know what to say,
That it was just fate

Looking back I wasn’t free,
That you really loved me
And I just couldnt see

Now that your gone I want us back,
Not a lie, a fact
I hope this was not a one way track

If that was the end i'm sorry,
Maybe I should'nt have Been so hastey,
To end it so abrubtly

I wish I could Turn back time,
And fix the problems of yours and  mine,
Our fight

All I got from you was kindness,
I was cursed with this blindness,
To forget whats mine

Now I see a chance,
A glimps, but a chance,
Maybe theres hope

Just without my sniper scope,
The military was no hope for us,
Just pain for us,

So i look to the sky for hope,
The hope thats not on a delacate rope.....

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Thank you for your well expressed entry, good luck in my contest, Josie