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Mrs. Jamison Hewitt, III is absolutely fuming with indignation. Her bastard of a husband (quite a bit older than her) has thought of some last minute stuff for a Xmas party they are planning. The party planners aren't available until tomorrow and she must mingle with this unruly mob herself to please the old coot who wants her personal touch.

To top it off, her rendezvous with her younger lover is now probably ruined as she'll never get in and out of this crowd in time to meet him. To take the edge off, she opens her purse to pop another xanex (forgetting to close it). When she next needs to open her purse, her money is missing (I'd up the $300 ante~(she has oodles of credit cards but this is the last straw), she sees a robo cop (security guard) and intends to make him feel her righteous wrath.

Let her get caught up in the melee, perhaps getting pushed over the rail and breaking her fool neck. You could even add a touch about her pearl or diamond necklace breaking sending gems rolling everywhere.

Had she known, (gold digger that she is) would the money have mattered so much?

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  • individuality gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    hahaha - it ios a tough life at times is it not, we can not make our appointmnets for love for crap gets in the way


    • nichtmich silver member
      June 5, 2008
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      MOST appreciated, don't you hate it when crap happens?


  • nichtmich silver member
    June 4, 2008
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    Most appreciated The character was hinted at, I thought you might want to flesh her out a bit. Everyone is intertwining, so....

    Please make a note to IM me when the story is finished, however you decide to do it!


  • buffsab99
    June 4, 2008

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    Excellent

    I love it, this is exactly what i am looking for. thank you and best of luck in the contest