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Let It Flow

From your fountain of a pen
let your ink spill 'cross the pages
of the minds of mortal men
and the memory of ages

let your mind be free to wander
Unbind your fears and let 'em go
let your mania meander
Let it flow

Above the moonlit ocean
and beneath volcanic forge
rings a voice of raw emotion
harness it and make it yours

let your memories grow fonder
Unwind the years, just let 'em go
dream of what lies over yonder
Let it flow

Author notes

This is a prewrite.

Option #4 (what is over the hill)
reminded me of line 3 stanza 4...

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  • Gypsie Ink
    June 20, 2008

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    Stunning!

    A beautiful and intriguing write. Thank you for sharing, it has been a privalege! Thank you for entering and Best of luck!


    • Oktobere Sahnge
      June 20, 2008
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      Thank you,

      for all of your kind comments. And thank you for your wonderful contests... :]