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[ Choral music, stuck between my ears ]

Choral music, stuck between my ears
Middle of the night need, Black desire
Blood rises in my throat, Eyes gone hateful
Stepping with purpose, Blade of death in hand
Peace before I slay them, Moon in the sky
heightened senses, I can taste the fear
Bittersweet, Pray to your god
Countdown as the knife falls, Countdown till the climax
three
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      one

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Malekar, Contest entry

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  • Cerbie20
    June 4, 2008

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    hate... it is the stongest emotion that you can have, right up there tied with love. that is why i have this contest... so people can understand it. it was nice, and lots of emotion shown. good job!