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Last Farewell

good-bye my summer wind,
farewell my shallow stream,
good-bye for all eternity
for I am not returning.
adieu my little village
one I will sure miss;
good-bye my tall tree
one that I have always known.
for I am leaving
and parting with this world

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  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    June 4, 2008

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    oh sweeet sweet farewell well penned:S darlkin you worry me with this write:S i hope your okie and doing well:S dont part this world if you do who will help to deliver God's messages to those who are still passive and don't even know
    plz stayy
    love you loads hunnn


    • Faeryn
      June 4, 2008
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      Actually, I wrote this 5 years ago. I recently found it in the dark depths of my closet. Thanks for the comment.