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Window into Heaven

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Hanging in this space of quiet peace as if suspended in midair.

Weightless, floating, no burdens on my back.

As gentle creatures pass me by, no burdens do they have.

This must be a window into heaven; the home I left behind.

The calming blueness that brings peace within my soul.

The wonderous light and colors that flow from the surface above.

Perhaps heaven is not a place way off..

But deep within an ocean where no baggage can weigh me now.

I simply let that suitcase go and watch it float to the surface above.

Each burden transformed into love; recycled energy.

To touch someone upon the shore in need of heaven's love.

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Well journeyed muse of yours told me the truths of your inside..and that is appreciated as well..well done..and thanks..
  • Bob Fox
    June 8, 2008

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    Beautiful write

    The chance that heaven can be created from deep within. The idea of floating freely and becoming part of a great wonder. Your words made me smile & rarely do I do that


  • stavykm gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    Wow This Is Beautiful

    I love the title Window Into Heaven. Great imagery and flow with wonderful sense of Heaven and serentity without a care of burden in the world to carry. Very nice for me to read right about now. This is fabulous and the whole poem so expressed such a wonderful vacation snorkling in Kauaii!! Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm