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Nothing

No need to deny,
one look, a deserted wasteland.
Purpose passed to yesterday,
vision gone awry.
Ocean of tears barely dampens,
Nothing.

A contest entry

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 6, 2008

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    This is a very emotive short poem... I really like the middle two lines this is a well crafted poem and I enjoyed the read thank you for entering my contest!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 4, 2008
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    I like the imagery in this Montie. Such a desolate piece of writing too. Depression runs through this piece, tears fall, and you feel nothing. Nothing maybe but emptiness. Such sadness here. This was written so very well indeed. Your emotion really came through. Very atmospheric too.

     

    With

    Dark

    Love

    Wayne Leon

    :Fxx