the man
sneezes.
but I don't
say
"god bless-"
anymore.
Author notes
time changes everything
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- 1o words. by iverbthenoun.
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wow.
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love it... simple to the point... but when you read the title ... compare it to the piece... you see the point is so much larger than originally thought... thanks for sharing... it kicked ass..
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enter this in the other contest, please
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i agree
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Wow, that is powerful. And I so know what you mean
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