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Right to the point....

I love you.

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There is no need to use such fancy enhancers or anything of the sort to make my love sound greater than great for her, or to make myself compete with others who say this or that about they love someone more than this or that, I am different...I love her, and she loves me. Knowing that, I am complete with her. I will say this...

With all my heart I give to you, Allyson, I love you.

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  • Sealight
    June 11, 2008
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    I do love it!! And I think this is the shortest poem anyone's ever written, lol.


  • Nickey Mouse
    June 4, 2008
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    Nice.It is to the point.This has to be the shortest poem you ever wrote.Anyway I like it.


  • Powered by Tofu
    June 3, 2008

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    awww, zach! how sweet!
    definitly the shortest you've written, lol! but its so sweet.
    ally will love it.
    xoxo,
    --gooshawn <3