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Neutral



Neutral idles, heatedly
Drive soars, out of control
Get a tune up

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A love affair that is conflicted

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  • azure85 gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    Neutral idles, heatedly
    Drive soars, out of control
    Get a tune up

    Very good haiku, with multiple meanings. Thank you so much.


  • DogFish silver member
    June 3, 2008
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    I want to drive that dusty road
    blue skys ahead and in the rearview