hello my friend
its nice to see your shining face
i know we've been apart so long....
see my wrists friend
they welcome you openly
so soft and tender
they yern for your touch
help them dear friend
supply to their needs
they've waited so long for this moment to come
i know my friend i prommissed not to see you
shhhhh now my friend
no one will see you
work your sweet magic
bring my release
i wont lock you away
like they all wanted me to
you are mine now and mine alone
i wont hurt you
wont let them take you
please now just take me away from this place
i need sweet surrender
to set me out from the croud
i need to remember that my pain isnt mine
i dont own this dark soul
i dont own this sweet face
i dont own these thin arms
but you friend you are mine
Author notes
i miss my own razor blades so i wrote them a poem ... yes i still talk to them when i'm lonely....
it feels good to revert back to the dark side every once in a while doesn't it?
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i understand complatly
im sorry you felt that you had to cut yourself to feel better , i myself am a cutter and i feel ashamed when i do , but its the only way for me to deal with it at the time , and i do waswell feel that my knife is my best freind . - hugs her- hope you stop cutting -
WOW! I love this poem. I love how you used cutting as a friend. I never thought of it like that. I wrote a poem about hurting myself but it wasn't as good as this. I might post it and/or make a new one. You inspired me.
Oh yea and you know what this poem reminds me of? This song called Girl with Golden Eyes by SIX:A.M. If you know anything about this artist, you know he is talking about an addiction that he has to drugs. Which cutting is a lot like an addiction. But, such a good addiction in that. I should know. No, I know.
Here is the link.
Beautiful song like your poem.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvcZcKNDjRo
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Wow you really hit the nail on the head.
That is really how it is for many people including me.
It's truly up to everybody to stop being a friend to the razor.
Hope you and I can find that someday.
Take care.
-Crimson
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thanks for the comment, it's not easy but i've actualy not cut in several weeks i made a prommised a dear friend that i would try to stop for him and im tempted but i love him...so i dont want to scare him anymore...wish you luck!
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Very good write!!
I can relate a lot, sometimes it feels that all you have is a razor and it's your only friend.
Love the part that says,
see my wrists friend
they welcome you openly
so soft and tender
they yern for your touch
Amazing Keep it up!!!
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thanks it was somthing i needed to put out in the open...thanks again for the imput!
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UM OKAY IT WAS GOOD REALY GOOD BUT UM IT CONFUSSED ME WHATS THE POINT OF IT WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO SAY ALL I GET OUT OFF IT IS MY FRIEND IS DEAR SO I CANT WAIT TILL YOU GET BACK I MISS YOU SO MUCH I HOPE YOUR OKAY BEING WITH YOUR REAL DAD AND ALL IT MUST BE TUFF HAVING TO SEE HIM AGAIN AFTER ALL THAT HE DID BUT HE IS YOUR DAD AND I KNOW HE HURT YOU BUT EVERYONE DESERVES A SECOND CHANCES EVEN YOUR DAD THINK ABOUT IT
I LOVE YOU BUNCHS
KATHY
AKA
CHICKA
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Letting the shadow of our souls out everyonce and a while can be very liberating to those of us who know how to live with it.... The release you find in dripping salvation is also attainable through other such shadow plays, but i think you enjoy this enough that offering another way might be foolish on my part.... Oh look now i've ranted on so... Anyway it was a lovely poem, well written and heartfelt... Good job, i liked it a lot!
peace,
hypnorocker
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