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Rain

                  a
                  drop
                of water
              yet simple
              and peaceful
            filled with an
            completeness.full
          of time, yet has no
          time at all,drops from
        the sky one by one.leaves
        you with a peaceful thought
        .a need to be free. silence
          completes the air around
            you harmonizing with
            a duo of little
              rain drops
             

Author notes

i just learned how to create this type of poem where the poem creates a picture, this one is supposed to be a water drop......like rain^_^

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  • PurpleCrocus
    June 4, 2008

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    So pretty!! It's totally pretty!! I like how it looks, and it's got a deep meaning, which is a bit unusual for you. But good, good! =P