Ask me to give you the final dance
The slow and soft music of unknown romance
Amazed as I am that you gave me this chance
This moment's for you and I both
Smiles and flowers and blushes adorn us
Streamers and dancers and laughter surround us
Couples and singles, they swirl all around us
This moment's for you and I both
Well this is our night to enjoy the view
When among the crowd it's just me and you
Where my big brown eyes meet your eyes of blue
This moment's for you and I both
Under the starlight we stare at the clear skies
Glancing around us and we shyly meet eyes
Savor the moment before we say our goodbyes
This moment's for you and I both
Author notes
just in case...
"You And I Both"
6-16-08
'I did not read the rules'
My favorite color is AQUA
Advocation
Limitation
Miraculous
Nuzzle
Quixotic
7-10-08
I actually forgot to put this...this song is kinda inspired by the music to "Ladybird" by Tears For Fears. Listen to the song, and fit the words to the tune...'cept for the "ladybird fly awaaaay..." part
A contest entry
- Come Enjoy Jason Mraz With Me by Cannonsfire.
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So...what do you think?
Comments
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Beautiful!
A really nice lyrical poem. Nice flow!
regards,
DeGraw
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Please go read my ruuuules
and put some things in your author's box 
. Done complaining. commenting now =].
I love the rhyme scheme you had here, and the last line you used on every stanza, it really summed up the poem beautifully. What a wonderful moment! Good luck!
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Nice job!
Good luck in my contest!
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this is great. the pattern is wonderful.
thanks for entering and all the best in the contest.
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Just lovely Love, C
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Wow! This was really good. I love the pattern to it, and the rhyming it has... and the repetition of You and I Both... this is just really good. I like it. Good job with this!
♥Chelsea
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