We clash
So different
Yet so dependent on each other
Without one, the other rages
We create balance
We create harmony
We create chaos
We are not meant to be together
But we cant live without each other
We are elemental opposites
Author notes
there, now you have insight into my disheveled brain
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Strong and forthright, this one encourages
me to give thought and focus to extremes.
Wonderful gift of brevity and insight.
Thank-you for sharing and writing for me.
Blue
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WOW!
This is beautifully written with wisdom and meaning. Yes a lot of times we may not like the people around us, and we may not like how they live, dress, or act, but we need them just the same, even though we are elemental opposites.
You penned this very well. Keep on writing and a perfect 10 for this.
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wow, thank you, it means alot to have someone appreciate my work
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