Slanderous lies flung
from jealousies lips
Shattering images
of innocence...
Deceitful barbs
take root..
And false facades
crumble..
Loosening inner
sanctums..
Falling prey
to maliciousness.
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A contest entry
- 10/25/30 QUICKIE! by AngelWithDarkWings.
660 points, ended June 3, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yah, this is a wicked awsome poem. im speechless, you're good.
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More than worthy of the gold!!!
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congrats on gold auntie!
your so beautiful
i love you so much -
Damn that's good!!! 'jealousies lips' sling many barbs!! Awesome! I expect to see a shiney on this!!
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How cruel we are without really trying to be.
A great write auntie.
I wish you luck.
~Kystal Angel
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How true it is... And some people are able to yank the rug frrom under you so quickly, you aren't even aware you are crumbling, until the pieces hit the floor... Awesome...
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excellent take on the prompt. this poem is very powerful to me. its sad that people do this each other. words whether they are spoken or whether they are written are powerful and can destroy someone.. ones self esteem can crumble within a short period of time. the imagery throughout this poem of yours is quite astounding.
excellent job on the poem
good luck in the contest
K.Anne
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Great take on the prompt! Beautiful, your form, your words, just excellence. Good luck, not that you need it.
-Les
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