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"I know," was a phrase her lips had spoken in rote response,

words uttered in constant reply to questions of habitual poor choices,

unto every lesson of reality that she never learned

in life's perennial semesters of inner revealing

with circumstance's mentor constantly giving such grueling exams.

 

She never savored the honey of change even when it meant sugary seconds,

stumbling from one episode of sorrow to another,

broken hearts she left along the way,

love's homework for her spirit never completed.

 

One fatal moment of dire error, time faded in single blink,

waking on eternal meadow and soul trapped upon a chair,

one place to sit among a legion of furniture.

 

A voice, having her tone, now uttered the truths she refused in life to hear,

stuck without a single recess on enlightenment's examination chair

unable to escape to next plain of thought

until her ears of understanding stopped being deaf to wisdom's assignments.

 

Afterlife she discovered meant languishing in an immortal schoolhouse

where failing to study the letters of universal light's language

kept one forever in divine study hall.

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Picture Link: http://liek.deviantart.com/art/I-see-empty-people-64777426

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 13, 2008

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    Gosh.
    Speechless in awe once again of your talent and words.
    I adore the final stanza of this


    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    A brilliant take on the pic.. we really do need pause and take in life's lessons don't we!


  • autumns rising
    June 3, 2008

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    Very interesting phrasing. I enjoyed this though. The first stanza was my favorite, it was a good opening
    best of the luck in the contest =]