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Real? or Fake?

You are my only love
You own my heart always
You know my smile
You have my laugh

Baby don't you see
I want to be with you
I hate not being in your arms
Your my world and my everything

Once I douted my love
Now I know for sure
You are my only love
Who I want to grow old for

Do you take my love for granted
Or is it just me who you use
Baby I would do anything
Just to touch you

Author notes

This was written for someone then I got this feelin that it wasnt write. Thats where the last 4 lines come in to effect. I dont dout my love. It's everyone elses love I dout.

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 18, 2008
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    amazing


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    This poem is amazing!

    I'm loving the last lines...
    Also like- You have my laugh.

    It's suggesting you guys are synonymous with each other.
    Something I can only dream about.


  • jstrauch
    June 8, 2008

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    i dont take ur love for granted and i love you oh so much ur my everything and ur heart belongs with mine I love you baby nd love this poem


  • Melodies
    June 3, 2008

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    'Lo 'lil Sis... I see from this loving poem that you are feeling very happy about someone and so I am sending you this present: and this for a treat:

    lol Love your poem, you know. Melodies

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