The Blade is cold
Against my reging skin
All I can see is red
I can feel my heart race
The blade breaks the skin
Blood droplets run away down my wrist
It feels so perfect
Yet I know it's so wrong
The blood forms in a puddle
Like the rain falling from the sky
They can't see past the smile
It all seems perfect to them
The blood flows more rapidly now
I feel myself slip away
No one knew how it felt
Knowing you can't be with who you love
Just tell me what you think
Comments
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powerful write....i kno how you feel...and yes i do kno how it feels to not be with the one you love..you have to stay strong and wait till the day you can be together.
xoxo- christina
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i feel like i read this poem about 20 times already.theres so many like this.didint do anything for me.i thought it was cliche.
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AMAZING
this is realy great
my favroite line(s)
"They can't see past the smile
It all seems perfect to them"if ppl only knew what goes on
[iloveit]
always,,,
Brokenlovelyness
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Aww... Sweet Aussie Sis, you are the most darling and lovable girl, ever.
Someday you're going to find just the right person to return your passionate love. 
A poem that shows your pain, beautifully written.
Melodies, your big sis!
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