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Back to a Path Towards Home

"What you don't feel, you will not grasp by art,
Unless it wells out of your soul
And with sheer pleasure takes control,
Compelling every listener's heart.
But sit - and sit, and patch and knead,
Cook a ragout, reheat your hashes,
Blow at the sparks and try to breed
A fire out of piles of ashes!
Children and apes may think it great,
If that should titillate your gum,
But from heart to heart you will never create.
If from your heart it does not come." -Faust I


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For the moment of being lost,
words of simplicity knew pleasure
as winding roads became uneven;
but remembrances of wanting this
unknown- unrecognizable tenure
kneeled itself before these barren
feet, while expectations of knit one, pearl
two encompassed themselves in patchwork
affectivity…


And scents of sensibility lingered
within the mere moments of recognition


Confiding behind manuscripts and ink-
homemade delights like grandma use to make,
every pore opened- only to sink beyond the
veils of pure excitement


~But still, they held firmly as if
nothing would separate this form
from its being


Standing still watching it all
calmly drift by, an imaginative
relinquishment sighed in peaceful
contentment


Thinking about yesterday’s
laughter echoing not far behind


Yet, traversed in cacophony’s
simplistic world, was when home
seemed but a mere stepping stone
away

Author notes

Because I do this out of habit, any and all quotes are placed with the poem and not in the A.N.

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    June 5, 2008

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    That is fine..... I just needed a reference point...

    this poem needs no refrence point at all...the writing is like an aroma that weaves and swirls...it is like yarn unraveled from a project...it is the beautiful use of language in the highest way that makes this poem incredible...

    rules are to broken. *smile*


  • ennovy silver member
    June 4, 2008

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    You will be a wonderful parent with these values shared with children & family. This was surely a thought to ponder, and written brillantly....Made me think of my Grandmother.....aquenenovy


  • Hetha gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    That's generally a good rule of thumb, as it credits the original author of the quote. Again, I am blown away by your talent and powerful voice. Simply put, this is beyond beautiful, and certainly conjured some nostalgic images in my mind, of growing up and the values I learned.