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How Can I Tell Him?

Do I tell him?
Uncertainty spilling over the brim
Of my rapidly beating heart
I'm so nervous, this mustn't be a good start
He's standing right over there
I can't help but stare
He looks over catches my eye
As he walks over, I suddenly become shy
Me, the girl who's not afraid to show who she is
Our eyes meet and I get lost in his

How can I say it?
Say something I wouldn't dare to admit,
That I like this weird guy
On my brain I now can't rely
Him being so near
Brings up a new-found fear
That I will do something stupid
I must have been struck by an arrow of Cupid
He smiles and my legs go weak
I seem to have lost the ability to speak

Does he know how I feel?
This doesn't seem real
My mouth has gone too dry
Things seem to have gone awry
I close my eyes and count to three
Maybe now he might see
That I've liked him for so very long
I hope he sees something and isn't wrong
I give up, I can't say it
Maybe some other time I can admit

Author notes

"My mouth is dry with words I cannot verbalize" from We Are Broken by Paramore

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  • Mistress Masquerade
    June 3, 2008

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    I kicked this guy today! Hehe, he kicked back though.. He's mean to me.. But I started it.. Haha, I love this work, its perfect and fits how you feel. Best of luck my friend, we're almost free!


    • Note The Sarcasm
      June 3, 2008
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      ugh. thank god. Only like two more, well, one, seeing as they're half days, left of school! You are such a little instigator. Loser.


  • demuren
    June 3, 2008

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    this is so true!!!
    i love the layout,
    the scheme,
    the progression of thoughts....
    well penned.i like this!