Yo no lo conozco
pero yo lo siento
en el corazón.
¿Sabes que
me muero por ti?
¿Y lo sientes también?
Nunca creí que fuera posible
sentir así,
nunca creí
en el amor.
Me reía cuando leía poemas,
y los escritores románticos
me despertaban la compasión
porque esperaban en lo irreal.
Pero si no creo en el amor,
y perfección es un invento de Disney,
Dime, mi vida,
porque caminaría mil millas
para verte una vez
y porque sacrificaría todo
por ti,
por amor.
Author notes
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Translation: I don't know it / But I feel it / In my heart. / Do you know that / I'd die for you? / And do you feel it too? / I never believed that it was possible / to feel like this, / I never believed / in love. / I laughed when I read poems, / and romantic writers / aroused my pity / because they hoped in the unreal. / But if I don't believe in love, / and perfection is an invention of Disney, / Tell me, my life, / why I'd walk a thousand miles / to see you once / and why I'd sacrifice everything / for you, / for love.
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camılle..
ı wonder. y r ur sweetest poems always ın spanısh??
guess what??
ı dıdnt use ur translatıon to read thıs. ı understood ıt wıthout ıt!!!,
yay go meeeeeee!!!!!!
great wrıte
/(and wrıte more sweet poems ın ENGLISH)) porfavor
ahahahaha
mel
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Translation notes: use "para" instead of "por" for the last two lines (see: http://www.studyspanish.com/lessons/porpara.htm)
"why I'd walk a thousand miles" is a little so similar to that michelle branch song
otherwise, good emotion and feeling =] -
Wow, the spanish version (although I dont speak much) is beautifully flowing, and the english version(which I can actually understand is just beautiful. Great job with this one!
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Wow... this is very heartfelt. The Disney like was kinda random, but I liked it. I think I get what you were going for with it.
I like how the poem is about understanding, and it shows your struggle to believe in the love. Greatly written! -
Poetry is more romantic in Spanish. This is so beautiful. I love the bit saying talking about if perfection is an invention of Disney lol. You might want to translate it in your author's notes so non-Spanish speakers can enjoy this as well.
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Nicely written... although you have two grammatical mistakes, although they don't fade the poem at all. Nicely done, I guess you did this without a translator.
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