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Path Of Life

There are

Beautiful red roses,
Black roses,
And pink roses.
So many roses of choice,
There are roses of love,
Roses of death,
And there are,
Roses of friendship.
Some roses lead to love.
The happiness of love,
The pain love may bring,

Love is a wonderful thing,
Love is desirable.
Love is in the air.
After the love,
Comes death.
Darkness of death.
Paths of death.
How to describe death,
We shall not know.
For this is a place, we go.
This is a path,

We take.

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  • Blossom Fairy
    June 16, 2008
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    Lovely roses poem. Admiring and giving you a gift:

    lol

  • Fitz1901
    June 15, 2008

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    I like the comparison you made here, to subjects completley opposite to each other brought together to magnify thier importance.

    Great write and thanks for entering


  • Periwinkle Blue
    June 6, 2008
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    POP! My eyes blinked! What a charming poem you have written.


  • Melodies
    June 5, 2008

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    Admiring and thinking... HEY! Totally!

    What an amazing poem... has dramatic lines with images that bring happiness and then the despair of death. Fine contrast and I love the roses for the backdrop of your poem.

    Melodies


  • Justin
    June 5, 2008

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    Wow... I liked the cycle that came with this poem. Very thought-provoking. You have a knack for using repetition for emphasis... continue to develop it in future poems. Nicely done!

    Thank you for sharing this piece with us. It was certainly a well done write. You seem to have a lot of talent... perhaps you should submit something into my contest? Ah, anyway.... uhm, welcome to All Poetry!

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