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The Happy Duck =]

Pickly Smuck
had a duck
named Jimmy Sue
He didnt have a clue
he'd fly into trees
and eat fish out of small seas
he thought he could talk
but he couldnt even really walk
his eyes were black as coal
He loved to rock-and-roll
jamming to the beat
with his little webbed feet.
all in all he was a happy duck
til he became the main dish at a potluck.

Author notes

bahaha I'm a crazy kiddo =]

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    June 3, 2008

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    I am still laughing this is realy good I just love that last line.
    til he became the main dish at a Potluck.
    Poor Jimmy Sue.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest