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Nightlife

Keep up your guard sweetheart
For this is the way of the night
It's possessed and controlled-
by those whose souls have taken flight
As long as you stay aware of your surroundings,
don't worry you'll be alright
Be careful of dark corridors and abandoned streets,
try to stay in the light.

Author notes

A message that can apply to a multitude of situations.
Especially when its best to keep up your guard.

That's how I am with everything now, always alert.

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  • sunflowers21573
    July 25, 2008

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    I see where you are going with this and you have made a good point for sure! Your writings have come across clear to me! Great job!


  • Jfd
    June 26, 2008

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    i think this is a nice write, but it would be even better if you expanded a little bit, it felt a little rushed....though you were able to convey the emotion you were going for very well....thanks for taking the time to enter!


  • exithere
    June 3, 2008

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    i like it. it has a good vibe to it. good write sweetie!!! and yeah it is good to always keep uo your guard...you'll never get hurt that way. so yeah i hope things are going awsome and i love you and i'll see you tomoro